Tears of BloodTears of BloodBlaster fire. Blood, so much blood. A pale face, mouthing words. A heartbeat. Rage built up in his heart and soul. He lashed out with the Force in anger. Everything went black.Anakin awoke in a cold sweat, shivering in shock. He pulled away the curtain separating the room that he shared with Ahsoka. She was huddled under the sheets of her bed, pleasantly dreaming. The sight of her relaxed and safe seemed to ease Anakin's heart from racing.Ever since Padme's death, Anakin looked to Ahsoka for comfort. He still vividly remembered his wife's death. Sometimes he would wonder if he could tell Ahsoka of all the pain in his weary soul.Anakin sat down on his bed, his jaw in his palms, looking at Ahsoka sleep. He watched her breathe in and out. The repeating sighs relaxed him. Anakin watched the rays of sunlight cast over the floor as the people of Corocaunt began their days, the soft drone of power in the very planet itself moaning from the depths of the worldly city.He look
Comatose Conscious: Chapter 5Chapter 5, AwakeningAnakin's POVWhen I opened my eyes, I couldn't breathe. I gasped and gasped, trying to suck in air. But I couldn't, because what I saw above me sent a chill down my spine. I saw sunlight bleeding through the surface of water. I frantically swam to the surface, unsure how I ended up in water, but determined to reach the sky again.When I breached the wall between sea and shore, I coughed rapidly, breathing in large lungfuls of air. As I swam to the nearby shore, I noticed that I was in the middle of a tall forest, but also noticed that forests weren't usually right next to a deep body of water. I waded up the muddy banks, struggling to not get stuck in the silt. When I finally stood, the water disappeared, as if it was never there. I was still soaked, though.After realizing how cold it was, I gathered some fallen branches and lit a fire, huddled around the flames, desperate to get warm. It was then that I noticed that I was completely naked.
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